Hello and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be talking to you about my writing this week. My goal this week was to use a variety of sentences structures, beginnings and lengths to give effect.We had to take a text and edit it so it was wow. I took a text on how to tie your shoes and made it my way. Some ways I edited it was I put in words like firstly and secondly. I also put in a couple compound sentences. A compound sentence is when you add in 2 causes. Here is my finished product.
Do you know any other ways to tie you shoes?
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