Here is my first Paragraphs.
“Dom HURRY UP!” Yelled Owen.
“ I’ll be there when I’m there!” Aggressive replied Dom.
Stella was packing all the bags in the car. They were going to their Nana's house. But the 3 kids Dom, Owen and Stella were taking the Bus there. Their parents were going to drop them off. When they got to the Bus station they could see the dark gloomy clouds looking over them. It looks terrifying.
“ Do you have everything?” Mum asked for the a millionth time.
“YES.” The 3 kids moaned.
Have you ever wrote a narrative?
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